Blog Feedback - Part 2

Once again, I received feedback on my blog, to see how I am doing and how far I have reached in the whole process. It was marked, and then I received verbal feedback.

One of the points on improvement where the fact that I need to add some more images to accompany my text, wherever necessary. Due to this point, I have viewed my posts and seen where I can add images, and done so accordingly. Also, it was noted that sometimes my explanations and posts where a bit on the short side, and required a better quality of writing. I then proceeded to add more explanations on my posts, and tried to write more where I could, but not trying to make it appear longer where it does not need to be.

Blog Feedback - Part 1

This is feedback from my teacher about my blog.

Changes I made

The main issue occurred was that my blog posts didn't flow in a reasonably suitable order. The posts were all cluttered up, due to posting them each at different times. I learnt how to change the date and time, and have now arranged them so all the journal posts flow in order. For example, all the pitch posts now go together and so on with the other posts. This had to be changed to make it easier to read and easier to find. Also, I had to change all the names of my lesson posts to journal, due to them sounding more like the journal entries.. I changed the post titles on each of the lesson posts by editing it.

Pitch Feedback

 

Good elements 

Reading all the feedback, we noticed a few good points that kept cropping up. For example, they all said that the release date was appropriate. Also, they thought that the use of unknown characters is a good idea. Some also said that our narrative was also good. The use of director also cropped up as a good element. 

Bad elements

We also noticed a few sections that need improving. For example, they said we need to expand on our target audience and research into unknown actors we can use. Another point raised, is that our Box Office predictions was too high, and that our budget should be lower. A finally issue raised in the feedback, was that someone thought our name could be a little scarier.


Improvements

We went through this, and decided that we will keep the name as it as, as we feel that it is appropriate. Also, we decided to increase our budget to 15 million, and the box office prediction now sits at 60 million. We have also begun researching into the unknown actors, by looking into upcoming stars and actors who have featured in minor film roles.