Once again, I received feedback on my blog, to see how I am doing and how far I have reached in the whole process. It was marked, and then I received verbal feedback.
One of the points on improvement where the fact that I need to add some more images to accompany my text, wherever necessary. Due to this point, I have viewed my posts and seen where I can add images, and done so accordingly. Also, it was noted that sometimes my explanations and posts where a bit on the short side, and required a better quality of writing. I then proceeded to add more explanations on my posts, and tried to write more where I could, but not trying to make it appear longer where it does not need to be.
Sunday 10 February 2013
Friday 8 February 2013
Blog Feedback - Part 1
This is feedback from my teacher about my blog.
Changes I made
The main issue occurred was that my blog posts didn't flow in a reasonably suitable order. The posts were all cluttered up, due to posting them each at different times. I learnt how to change the date and time, and have now arranged them so all the journal posts flow in order. For example, all the pitch posts now go together and so on with the other posts. This had to be changed to make it easier to read and easier to find. Also, I had to change all the names of my lesson posts to journal, due to them sounding more like the journal entries.. I changed the post titles on each of the lesson posts by editing it.
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